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| AMM3485 2008-08-13 ch 41,  | abuseI loved it. You did an excellent job! Awesome! |
| Katie 2008-08-08 ch 1, anon. | abuseI know this story is older and you may not get this review; however, I felt compelled to leave you my thoughts on this. I can say that this story is one of the most well-written stories I've found on this website. You've done a lot of in-depth characterization and I admire the originality of both your storyline and characters [especially the antagonist]. You have a lot of talent, and I look forward to reading a lot more from you! |
| Dark-Passion67 2008-08-06 ch 41, | abuseThis was one ofthe best stories ever! It was sad but at least the two fell in love. Your a wonderful writer and I think this should have an award:) -Nayy |
| Cat-Rivera 2008-07-18 ch 41, | abusethis was such a good story! im sorry i didnt review for the chapters, but i wanted to read them so badly. i was hooked. your such a good writer, i loved all the different point of views, it tied the story together. great job |
| pretitiful 2008-03-29 ch 1, | abusewow. the first chapter has already captured my attention. you are a great writer and while reading your story it makes me feel like i;m actually watching this all happen. |
| sunflowersing 2008-03-27 ch 3, | abuseThe story with Eric reminds me of my step-dad. It was a surprise meeting, too. |
| sunflowersing 2008-03-27 ch 2, | abuseAidan probably wouldn't want my pity, but I said in my head, "Poor Aidan". Such an awesome name, too. How do you pronounce it? sunflowersing |
| sunflowersing 2008-03-27 ch 1, | abuseThat was such a moving beginning. sunflowersing |
| funky-gg 2007-12-25 ch 1, | abuselove it so far very sad |
| everybodyloveschocolate 2007-12-24 ch 41, | abuseThis is a wonderful story! It's so heart-wrenching, God I could have cried. You did a really, really great job on this! I'm kind of sad to see it end. Good job, have a nice day. :D |
| DiddlingFiddles 2007-10-10 ch 1, | abuseadding to fave stories. |
| SapphireEyes16 2007-09-30 ch 41, | abusemy god this story is so heartbreaking, but at least they end up together! |
| JellyBeaner 2007-08-25 ch 41, | abuseso this was a really great story. I read it all today, and while the first part was REALLY creepy, you write really well, and it was really good. Keep writing things! |
| JellyBeaner 2007-08-25 ch 7, | abuseThis is REALLY GOOD! I'm very intrigued and I can't wait to keep reading! |
| sUmM3R43terNIt33 2007-08-22 ch 41, | abusewow this story is really great. The beginning was kinda boring b'coz of too much angst but later on it became more easier to understand the character. I really like Aidan and Saige together ...great ending |