Ugh, I seriously think she's a bit**. She complains that people have no empathy for her? She had no natural empathy for Aidan! Who "watches with slight interest" at someone going through an episode like that? I know she was thinking he was going through something different, but still. Honestly, it's makes me feel uncaring towards her. I feel no sympathy towards her whatsoever.

:(

... I have no words...

wow! This story is great

i can honestly say this story is the best one i have read in a long time

oh wow. this was amazing i loved it!
great job telling not only what was currently happening but what happened to your characters in the past to make them like that...especially edgar. ick.
love the name aidan :).
i feel like if that had happened to anyone else it would have ruined them forever, but you had the right characters in that situation and it played out nicely.

That was really powerful. Very moving and very well realistic. I thought the emotions and the circumstances wer very well though out and it was amazing. Thank you for writing this.

I loved it. You did an excellent job! Awesome!

I know this story is older and you may not get this review; however, I felt compelled to leave you my thoughts on this.

I can say that this story is one of the most well-written stories I've found on this website. You've done a lot of in-depth characterization and I admire the originality of both your storyline and characters [especially the antagonist].

You have a lot of talent, and I look forward to reading a lot more from you!

This was one ofthe best stories ever!
It was sad but at least the two fell in love.
Your a wonderful writer and I think this should have an award:)
-Nayy

this was such a good story! im sorry i didnt review for the chapters, but i wanted to read them so badly. i was hooked. your such a good writer, i loved all the different point of views, it tied the story together. great job

wow.
the first chapter has already captured my attention. you are a great writer and while reading your story it makes me feel like i;m actually watching this all happen.

The story with Eric reminds me of my step-dad. It was a surprise meeting, too.

Aidan probably wouldn't want my pity, but I said in my head, "Poor Aidan". Such an awesome name, too. How do you pronounce it?

sunflowersing

That was such a moving beginning.

sunflowersing

love it so far very sad