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LightWhereTheSunDontShine 2009-06-30 . chapter 15
Yea! Another happy ending! Enless you think of what they losed but everyone was happy in the end!
LightWhereTheSunDontShine 2009-06-30 . chapter 12
Ah! Stupid K! I'm totally against slavery and anyone for it! Poor Adam! You better keep him alive! Any ways, continue soon!
LightWhereTheSunDontShine 2009-06-30 . chapter 10
Is there any more war people for them to run into? Timmy is the last one right? And why can't he see a doctor?
LightWhereTheSunDontShine 2009-06-30 . chapter 1
First chapter and Im already crying again! Can't wait to read the rest!
zagato 2004-08-22 . chapter 15
this is wonderful!
Sierra Nicole 2003-05-22 . chapter 15
The last bit of this chapter was a little confusing, as it seemed to skip time quite quickly. I almost thought it was going to end up being just a dream of Jessica's, but apparently it wasn't. Did we lose a few paragraphs? Just wondering, because your continuity has never been this jolty before.
~Sierra
cmar 2003-05-13 . chapter 15
Another satisfying ending. Looking forward to more stories from you.
cmar 2003-05-10 . chapter 14
Again, very good, good action scene, but I would have liked it a little longer. But maybe it's realistic that it was over so quickly.

Keep up the good work!
Sierra Nicole 2003-05-05 . chapter 13
Once again, it's been a while since I checked over here, and look at all these new chapters! Wow. Keep up the good work.

~Sierra
cmar 2003-04-27 . chapter 13
Interesting plot development, I'm curious to see where you go with it.

I'm sure there's going to be trouble...
Falcon2 2003-04-06 . chapter 11
Keep going- this is good!
cmar 2003-04-05 . chapter 11
Very enjoyable, Jesse seems like an interesting characters, and I hope to see him again.
cmar 2003-04-03 . chapter 10
Very interesting, can't wait to see more.
Gold Enchantress 2003-03-30 . chapter 1
*sighs* I should've known that their happiness couldn't last forever; that it would be one day be torn. If only love could conquer all. But the only thing love surely can't conquer is the very force that had plagued the lives of everyone in the United States in the early 1860s: death. To think Dan had spent four years of his life staring death in the face, watching it suck at the lives of his comrades, as they bled to death before his very eyes. And now it's come to claim him.

The only bright to this is that he has now joined the beloved friends he lost during the war. (Hey, I'm trying to be optimistic here.)
cmar 2003-03-30 . chapter 9
That was really good, well paced and thoughtful.

Happy, but sad too. Waiting to see how this turns out.
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