Wow, that was really intriguing. Very good character interaction and imagery.

Update?

This is a really cool idea and I enjoyed reading it... but what happens if there is no one to pick up the pieces? Anyways, this was really cool to read and an interesting topic to address.

Aww. That's really just adorable.

I hope someone has the courtesy to remember all of my old characters, after I die.

This is getting fav'd.

this is making me cry cause I feel guilty now about all the characters I've written and then forgotten about...oh my god, I'm a murderer!

I like it, but you're supposed to have it double-spaced. No prob; it's easy to read, but you might get in trouble with the FP admin.

I like the plot. Yes, a seque would be nice. Maybe just another chapter? I think it's good. Potential. Keep it up!

LOL. This is a neat, well-written short story with great dialogue and a sweet ending. There's one part where it says, "Daniel held her hand until she died, and then he folded them gently upon her breast and stood up."--there's numerical inconsistency between hand and "them". But other than that, great job!

Museworks

*smiles faintly* That's a really cool idea. What happens to the characters... Sweetly written, with a great idea. If there was more to this, I'd definately read it. It's just... poignant, I think would be the right word.

Oh, wow. I haven't read too much on fictionpress, since I usually write fanfiction, but this is really unique and very well-written. Great job!

Incredible - and what a wonderful idea! I can't think of anything to add other than my congratulations for such a superb and pleasurefull tale.

Wow, this is interesting! ^^ My only suggestion is maybe... make the sentences flow a little more? I dunno. XD I really like it, and I'm waiting for your next update!

this one was funny... but it would never work if it was me who died.. =(... most of my characters are not in any story... they kinda just pops up in my head.. few of them make it into a story... =/anyways.. thsi story was really good! you write well! it was an interesting thing to write about...

//Jaz

:) This gives off a pleasent feeling.^_^

i like it. i really do. it's odd, but good. reminds me vaugely of inkheart. ever heard of it?

This a great story with a rare concept. the charectors are a little confusing, but over all its really good.