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| Maranwe Telrunya 2006-04-05 ch 1,   | That was a little confusing, but very intense, and pretty good for being a dream- interesting. |
| Bishoujo Fury 2005-12-09 ch 1, | :D Oo! I liked it. It was really interesting, and fun. Full of action. Liked. -thumbs up- |
| Abbreviations 2005-08-24 ch 1, | A very cool short story with well written combat. Kept my interest through to the very end, something that is pretty hard to do, great job. - Abbreviations, Open Up My Eager Eyes |
| Leylique Morrow 2005-08-03 ch 1, | I got a little lost toward the end there. By the time I got to the knives, the only thing registering in my brain was "zombies in a bar...blood everywhere...what kind of psycho has dreams like this?!!" I don't fully understand what Chaco and Marilee have to do with anything. Judging by your other reviews, I'm the only confused one here. Oh my. -Leila |
| Nienyalie 2005-07-14 ch 1, | Wow. Very exciting, it's like an explosion in my mind to read. The way it moves very quickly, it's very compressed. Wonderful. |
| Sulkdodds 2003-12-30 ch 1, | I wish I had dreams like that. While the writing is slightly confusing, it's an excellently spun yarn. Good description and a cracking pace makes me want to read more and more. |
| Sulia Shincho 2003-03-10 ch 1, | Very well written. Nice use of details, not over loaded with description or lack of. You really know what you're writing, which is actually rare to be honest. This is quite the story, real capitivating. Keep this up. -Sulia Shincho- |