wow, this is pretty danged good kira. really good. its simple yet not at the same time. funness

This is so beautiful. I love the elements and all that they represent and this is a really good example of that. Thanks for sharing it with us ^_^
Saharian

Whoa...
This is really beautiful...
Your discriptions are great!
Keep up the good work :)

I'm someone who finds such comfort and inspiration in nature... God speaks to me so clearly through it... and because of that, I really really connected with this poem... I really liked it

I think this is the best one yet, it captured everything and all emotions! This one is definitely my fav!

Great poem. It was short, but very good. Is this in anyway religious? I'm thinking of the last line.

*Faery Tragedy

Thumbs-up! I see you got it fixed great. Keep writing! This is Smiley-Bear new name. *smiles*

I think this is another one great work
excellent idea.
Please write more soon