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| NewFan 2008-02-13 ch 1,  | Please update so that I can provide a proper review. :) |
| pneumothorax 2005-07-08 ch 3,  | Interesting and a good read, although it looks like aren't updating anymore. That's sad :( |
| pneumothorax 2005-07-08 ch 1, | Interesting opening chapter. Seems to hold alot of potential. Intruiging. |
| ddz008 2003-10-18 ch 3, | GREAT STORY!! Keep writing! Is Seth a good or bad guy? Keep writing! :D |
| NotEnough 2003-07-01 ch 3, | This hasn't been updated in agges...WHY? i really, REALLY like this dammit. UPDATE, PLEASE...pretty, pretty please... |
| frizzy 2003-06-02 ch 3, | This is a great fic so far. I can't wait to read more so update again as soon as you are able to. Keep up the great work! |
| Mashimaro-Byul-012 2003-05-17 ch 3, | - -;; i donno y i didn't review for this earlier.. *sigh* *whacks herself* Mike: Let me do it! Me: NO! GO AWAY! anyhoo.. let's get bak to the business. i dont lyk Mark that much XP i lyk Tyler. cuz Tyler is hot. and so is Dylan. so Tyler and Dylan should get together. yawp yawp. Seth.. evil dude. hehehe.. plz continue~! |
| Luna Llena 2003-05-13 ch 3, | first story story of this kind that i have read and actualy like , update soon ...please. |
| Lux Alexander 2003-04-09 ch 3, | Uh ohs... *looks suspiciously at Seth* This doesn't bode well. Hm. Very interesting, keep going! |
| Edana 2003-04-09 ch 3, | Interesting, the plot is thickening. OMG, I feel so sorry for Mark since he obviously feels something for Tyler, and Tyler . . . I dunno, what's he feeling? I know it's his job to be all stoic and everything, but I hope he doesn't end up hurting Mark. OOh, I wonder what's going on with Seth, he gives me an uneasy feeling ^_^;; This is still a really original and intriguing story and I hope you contine soon! |
| Lux Alexander 2003-03-13 ch 2, | Very cute and original. I like where this is going... |
| Edana 2003-03-09 ch 2, | Wow, this is a really interesting story, and original too. I like the way you started it with an action scene, and then to find out it was a dream with, perhaps, a deeper meaning. I love the fact that the characters are all so different, and Tyler’s making me curious but I like him. Having the rules throughout the chapters relating to an event is a clever idea as well, and gives knowledge of the bodyguard profession without someone having to sit down and tell it. Actually, the bodyguard idea is really interesting and it’s clever how you don’t over glamorise it but still have the action. I wonder if Mark is going to be in danger . . . I can see this being a really great fic ^_^ |
| NiteDreamer 2003-02-26 ch 2, | hey very nice intro! i cant wait for more =) |
| Surtout Seul 2003-02-25 ch 2, | I like it I like it . such an interesting idea . never heard it before . ^_^ so this story kicks **! going to my favorites! definetely . I want to read the next chapter NOW!! |
| Laughing Cat 2003-02-21 ch 1, | I like this so far, it seems very interesting. I /especially/ like how you keep putting in the rules. ^_^ |