Ohh, Cool! I liked it, it was VERY interesting, kept me reading until the end. I don't know if the landing was a hoax, but now I have my doubts. But maybe this is just me but about the pictures from the moon, and the crater, what about the moon's lack of gravety? Just wonderin' and maybe you put it in. okay g2g.

Yeah I too have always wondered about this. Another point that you didn't pick up on - in the 'official' photos, the U.S flag is flying.but what happedned to the whole "no gravoty" thing?? hmm its a bit suspicious isn't it? lol

Ok, i liked the information part, but what's with the 2001 fox thing? How do you know that? Lol ^_^ anyway, i hope you write more about it, very intresting! ~*~IceAngel~*~

A shame this is so short, as I felt you were just getting into your stride when it ended. I admit to not being 100% what the ground rules for a "persusasive essay" are (we don't use the term in Britain), but assuming it means arguing for a particular position, then what you have written is good.

In answer to the "two light sources" point - of course there was another one: the Earth! The Moon is quite capable of casting shadows on Earth - ditto the Earth on the Moon.

I think we did land on the moon, but the most persuasive thing toward doubting for me was the fact that if you look at the pictures they took, there are two light sources. That is impossible, because on the moon the only light would be the sun. That's what causes doubt in me, but I still think we landed. It's just too much of a risk for a little bit of money.

For your essay style, it's good but a little wooden. Try not to just quote facts and others' opinions and put a little feeling into it. The other thing was the way you went from supporting the moon hoax to just saying you didn't believe it in the last line. It was a little bit confusing because it looked like you were supporting it. ^_^;

However, the essay was very good and informative, and definitly gets you thinking.

In response to your review, I've only read short stories and watched "Alien". No novels.

Nice essay, though perhaps a little short. I personally believe they went to the moon, although the idea of NASA faking it so the US could laud it over their Communist enemies is an interesting one.