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| Susurrent Threnody 2006-07-19 ch 1, | abuseScary. It reminds me of what happens so many times: something puts on a false appeareance to lure the prey into a trap. this was powerful. |
| liquid-dreams-139 2006-05-07 ch 1, | abusewow... scary... lol but great graphics i loved it i could so imagine it!! hahah |
| Bill 2003-07-29 ch 1, anon. | abuseThe personal translation lies in the nature of the fire. Masterful job. It's what you read poetry to find. |
| LeVampireNoir 2003-04-01 ch 1, | abuse::nods slowly:: I know just what you mean...and yet, we still never listen. ~war |
| Tristen 2003-02-21 ch 1, | abuse*Sucks on her cheeks for a moment or two* Wow. Erm.. Poetry is entitled to personal translation.. but I think this ones smack dab in the middle of your face yelling "LOOK AT ME YOU IDIOT I HAVE A MESSAGE" err.. right.. sorry Meds gone wacky.. Tristen |