Great story! But how did she know that he was the pirate? Did they have a picture on the Razza's files, and she recognized him, because in the beginning it seemed to imply that the Razza didn't quite know what he looked like yet.

A really cool start MW. Do you plan to write more of this? I hope so, because it sounds really cool. Good flow and the characters are fun to read about even if we're only just seeing them for the first time. Oh well ^^

J'ai un question. Do you intend to finish these stories? Or are they just shorts that you intend to leave hanging, because I think you could make short novellas out of them. Anyways, I like this, and I definitely approve of your characters. Onto the next!
~Toireasa

Well done and well written. Because this is so short I think it would work better as a chapter for your Shadow story.

Just a thought,

Lowell

Hehe, that was great, I just loved it. ^_^

Very good.

This isn't finished, or at least it doesn't feel like it. It feels more like a prologue to me - and it's pure science fiction, which strikes me as a little strange, coming from you. Well, *shrugs* it's your story.
I think this would have been better had it seemed more finished; as it is, I feel like there's something missing from it.
I'm sorry I couldn't say anything really complimentary about it.

Yay! This is also really good, this has a nice flow as a story. Can't wait to read your other story! Bai!
~*~Kiayla~*~

Ah, finally! I've gotten to this one at last (Now, I know I have reviewed everything of yours, lol). I still prefer the second story in this arc but this one was good too. I love your characters. I'd like to see you continue with these stories. Keep on writing.~CT

^_^ Very vivid story has a great start off point and good strong characters. I'll be back if you update.

Sorry it took me so long to come by here. I ususally review at least one of the stories of my each of my reviewers. But I've been hunting down my darling pets demanding that they give back my creativity. It's no fun having writters block for ALL my stories. You hear that you little demons? I want my creaivity back! Where'd you put it?!

Ice

SAI!
Great! All three little stories done! the only thing left is the novel! ^_^ YAY! It was good! written like a book and well thought out and stuff! ^_^