I understand the sentiment behind this, and I've attempted many a poem about friendship. Most of mine were trite and unconvincing and generally unsuccessful, but...

I think that you've done a good job making your thoughts original, rather than saying what everybody else says. However, I think that the rhyme scheme is limiting you. A lot of the rhymes seem very forced, which undermines the effect of the poem. I think you'd do much better putting this in free verse, so that you'd have more freedom to say what you want instead of concentrating on the rhyme. Noodle around with it a little; experimentation is the key to success in writing.

Keep writing!

~Weeba~

Ooh, I like this - very realistic and sweet.

I have traveled long and far from fanfiction(*Breathes heavily*). I must say this is okay, well, actually, very good, in my standards. Well, back to Fanfiction with me!(*zooms off*)

Great poem!! I like how you compare the good, (friends) with what happens bad (sleazes).

Kit-Kat