I don't know why i didn't read this before! All i can say is that as someone who grew up in a military environment, this was terrifyingly real to me and captured so well the fear and confusion i often felt as a child about what my father did for a living. (I don't mean to sound self-obsessed, i'm just trying to say that you've done this well, and it's a good thing)

i knew almost from the first line what my review would say.

and this is it.

brilliance. sheer, utter, and complete brilliance.

It's skilful, captivating and powerful - slightly distancing in places - and I'll dissect it later in an email, if you like?

Nicely did. I like the opening lines. They're very strong. Good emotion.