very sweet...you can feel the tenderness in this poem but just one thing, you say "your" quite a bit and i think it's a bit redudant...your lips, your eyes, your hair...maybe you could change that up a little bit...good job though
also...thanks for the review...it was greatly appreciated!

thats a really sweet poem.

Great job. This is really a beautiful expression of emotion.

This is one of the sweetest poems i've ever read.. very truthful and everythin.. i'm sure if u'r ex ever read this, she'd feel really bad that u ever broke up.. anywayz.. i luved the poem! keep writin!

aw, that is so sweet! ^_^ thanks for the reviews too!

GO disturbed. Nice free verse. Wording is great, very power full. It flows very well.


Micheal

Very nice.^^ As long as love binds two souls together, even if they are apart for a period of time, they will always remain in each other's hearts. If you aren't meant for each other, then be thankful that she became part of you, even if it's not forever. This is a good poem. Keep writing. read some of mine, please? ^^ thanks