Not a bad chapter if I do say so myself. It could be longer, but we all have our moments I suppose. Please update soon, I really like your writing style. ^_^

-Lio

Keep it coming--you'll make something great the more you try.

I got a notice in my mail that you put up an 8th chapter, but when I clicked the link, it wouldn't come up. Did you post and then take it back down? Or is FP just bugging out like usual? Plz let me know! I really like your story!

-Liomixboy3485@yahoo.com

Pretty good story, but you really need to update...

-Lio

Please, please, please, Update!

Uber uber good! Write more!! DO IT!

I love the story, but I just wanted to point out in the earlier chapters Chris was in 8th grade and when he first met Oden, he was in 9th grade. Now all of a sudden Chris is being called a sophmore and Oden is an 11th grader. -_-?

as much as I would like to say that the first one was better, I think the revised copy is great too. I miss you dood. Love Liza/Ashi

DD: *nods* Yes, this is good. Hopefully Oden and Chris get hooked up.

wow brill ending i loved it was really great this is really good keep going
axy

This is very cool. Keep writing

nice chapter loved the feelings and thoughts was really good cant wait for the next
axy

Oh yeah! Finally you're back. I am always and forever loving your story. Keep writing and you know I'll definetly follow it.

:O Something better be going on between Brent or I'll make up an imaginary character of my own with a chainsaw!Whoo, need to lay off the sugar for a bit. .. .(

This is a really good story i hope to hear more soon.keep writing!