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| boytoy13 2004-08-18 ch 1, | abuseyay for lesbian poetry! but seriosuly, i really liked it. your message is simple yet powerful |
| AntiPleasure 2004-02-22 ch 1, | abuse=smiles= yes! To love a woman is real, and this is a very beautiful piece that you've posted here. I'm impressed. =) And I know how beautiful it is to love a woman because I am feeling it right now at this moment... lovely writing. Jenna xx |
| Aftertaste of a Razorblade 2003-04-28 ch 1, | abuseTo answer your question in your review of my poem--no, she doesn't have to be a Democrat, she just can't be a Republican. I could not date someone who actually agrees with Dubaya. ANYWAY... How could I have missed reviewing this? It's simply, quite breathtaking. It gives me a sense of...something, that I can't quite place. I like this. A lot. |
| superspy 2003-03-26 ch 1, | abusedamn this is cute. |
| Kawarinaku Kinsei 2003-03-10 ch 1, | abuseThat's gorgeous, it really is. |
| Zapenstap 2003-02-23 ch 1, | abuseAwesome. Encouraging, if you are a boy. This would make a beautiful song if I knew anything about writing music. Save it somwhere. there are a few things that could possibly be improved, but generally I think this is really beautiful. keep writing. |