Reviews for Brown Eyes So Blue

PirateGrrl 2005-04-05 ch 1,	abuseThis is amazing! The rhyming (which I'm not a friend to in poetry) isn't forced in this poem. Because of that, you get to see/feel what Brown Eyed Girl is feeling. 'Unconditional and true' indeed. Hmmph. Well, I thought I'd check you out since you reviewed csol. Let me defend it: it was the first story I ever finished, and yes Jamie is an **. Plot? Meh. Like I said. It's finished. My other stories are better. I do appreciate you reading it, though. You are an amazing writer :D
Lina Inverse 2003-05-28 ch 1,	abuseI absolutely loved it, especially the line: "Like porcelain with glue."
breakdown in the waiting ro... 2003-03-15 ch 1,	abuseI'm not stalking you...I swear! Your writing is just so addicting, and hits home for me in so many ways...my mother, I told her I was bisexual...she gave me a book to convert me back over to Catholicism...when that didn't work...she told me I was a baby, stupid, and going to hell. Lovely, eh?
Kawarinaku Kinsei 2003-03-10 ch 1,	abuseOO I'm truly falling in love with your work. That's a brilliant poem, absolutely beautiful.
Aftertaste of a Razorblade 2003-03-09 ch 1,	abuseI love the rhyming (I can never write rhyming poetry myself). And I love the message. Great poem. Depressing, but in a good way. You know what I mean, don't you?
Kayochen 2003-02-23 ch 1,	abuseA very good poem, you did well to keep the rythm and ryme scheme going throughout the poem.