This poem really works as a snapshot of a lost moment in time. It's very visual - almost like a flashback in a film.
I particularly like, 'And now she wears a cloak of dust' which could simply be referring to the forgotten photograph in a dusty frame, or that the girl herself might be dead.

This is such wonderful poem!
YOu are a excellent writer.
Great job!

Wow. great poem. Lots of emotion. I'm glad that didn't actually happen. By the way, thanks for thanking me, ya. Awesome poem!

It's good.

Awwah.very sad, but well written.

*sniff* thats brilliant poetry
i think that its the best poetry that doesnt rhyme

This one is so sad! It is good though. Keep it up.
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