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| Dragen Eyez 2004-09-08 ch 1, anon. | abuseI have to say that I particularly like the style this was written in. you're really pushed forward to read each line.. another thing I noticed was as the poem progressed, the use of "I" increased, setting the reader up for the ending so that it struck a more powerful chord rather than just some skeletal persona. |
| Dragen Eyez 2004-09-08 ch 1, anon. | abuseI have to say that I particularly like the style this was written in. you're really pushed forward to read each line.. another thing I noticed was as the poem progressed, the use of "I" increased, setting the reader up for the ending so that it struck a more powerful chord rather than just some skeletal persona. |
| HereIDreamtIWasAnArchitect 2003-08-02 ch 1,  | abusei dont really know much about anorexia so i cant relate to it as i relate to your other poems, but this really got the point across, yknow? it was good! |
| Incubabe 2003-07-21 ch 1, | abuseThis is absolutely amazing - you are an amazing writer. There is such depth of feeling in your poetry. It's fantastic! Diana x |
| Palla 2003-07-17 ch 1, | abuseWow. I have never suffered from anorexia myself and (I hope I didn't misread your profile) it seems you did. The way you've communicated through this poem was exceptional. I haven't seen this particular "style" before and enjoyed it greatly. Please, continue your writing. |
| Kayley 2003-05-29 ch 1, | abuseWait... my poems got deleted? Well now I'm a little more than just slightly ** also. I had no idea my poems weren't there, I'm sorry about that Tori! I'll try to get them re-uploaded as soon as I can. I just hope I still have them all saved on my computer. Again, sorry 'bout that! |
| Suicidal Butterfly 2003-05-28 ch 1, | abuseLady Kayley; Lovely poem- nice to see you have a new twist on things. talk to me when you reupload your poetry- it's gotten me slightly **. I would have printed them out had I known you were going to delete them. The none to friendly; Tori Amos II./ |
| Silent Dreamer 2003-03-27 ch 1, | abusehey i like this alot its really good. |
| treehuggingpunk 2003-02-23 ch 1, | abusethis is very well written you discribe it so well |
| Tristen 2003-02-23 ch 1, | abuseErm.. Wow? *blinks staring* Thats really.. I mean REALLY morbid. hehe.. Tristen |