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Reviews For: Illusion
Kyalia 2003-06-26 . chapter 1
I know how that goes, too. And I'm happy I can finally access your account-- I'm on a restricted one and kept getting blocked.
Lilith Jade 2003-06-26 . chapter 1
i like that. it has very good rhythm. and I love your bio thing. now that's funny. *grin*
Aceles 2003-06-14 . chapter 1
Whoa...there is a boy I totally feel that way about...maybe I should write a poem about him...hm...YAY! *runs off to write love poem while sighing happily alot.
Jane Austen the 2nd 2003-06-12 . chapter 1
Love the topic, theme, tone...EVERYTHING! It's all good! I like HP 2! Please read some of my stories and poems and tell me your thoughts
Baby Milo 2003-06-12 . chapter 1
Wow, this is a really good poem!
Wanting But Not Knowing 2003-06-10 . chapter 1
i think we all can relate to this at some point or another. good job reflecting how you feel.
Sun-Kissed Lover 2003-05-22 . chapter 1
The Tusaki does like much! You should keep going! You really really got talent!!
juliemoonstar 2003-05-10 . chapter 1
Very good poem. The symbolism was very nicely done. Really expresses your feelings of loneliness as well as wantingness. Good job.
S. R. Devaste 2003-05-10 . chapter 1
Very good nice poetry...you have a talent for poetry.
Yaviewen 2003-04-16 . chapter 1
Pretty good... the ending needs to flow a little better, but good nonetheless. Thanks for reviewing Kumi Sataki's story. She's one of my buddies and writes so well, but no one ever reviews her stuff. :)
Salvador Edlin 2003-04-13 . chapter 1
I don't care much for poems, but this one was great. Good use of rhyme and symbolism.
Kumi Sataki 2003-04-13 . chapter 1
Wow, this is so good! I'm impressed! You have talent for poetry! It really expresses!

About your reviews for my stories: I'm glad you like them. Kan I'm probably not going to update anymore. I wrote one line that ruined the whole thing for me! But the other one I definitely will. Need I say anything about the Stupid Story?
Fire-Tamer-Gurl 2003-04-09 . chapter 1
WOW! that is like the best poem evr!i'm seirous!
Needa S 2003-02-24 . chapter 1
You now have a review! Excellent! Keep writing.
Veg-Head Cannibalism 2003-02-24 . chapter 1
Yeah! It's my poem and I like it!
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