Very interesting. I hope for an update soon.

hey sorry aint reviewed in ages
wow this is really really good
I hardly ever read stories like this but I can't wait to read more
gd on ya mate

I like! This really could be a great novel, and the flashbacks are so well-place that they don't break up the narrative flow at all. WONDERFUL! *grovels* Teach me your secret! Please?

wow... just wow. This is easily one of the best stories ive ever read, and i didnt even hafta buy a book. keep updating

Wow, it's been a while since I caught up on this story. You paint your characters very elegantly and believably. The descriptions of emotions and mannerisms (particularly the dark elf's "catlike" nature) are extremely well written. I really like how it's all coming along, keep it up!
-Kat

COL!
I love it, as ever! Really good! Update soon, PLEASE!
Luvs Elfie x

Oh boy. . . Escape horray. I just noticed i really needed to catch up. anyway i'm glad their escaping i can only hope they can get out. Kiannon is growing on me though is still like one nine quite a bit. Despite his . . . er personality sometimes. ANyway thanks for your review and e-mail. A sequel? Yay! Good luck.

--Belle

Woo hoo an update! Good chapter - but so short! Still, with evil computer problems, I suppose we can forgive you :P I'm really starting to like Alessa, hehe. I think she may have spunk...

its good! i got kinda confused with the whole would-be-assasin chapter, but i think i'm getting it, lol. let me know when you update!

Dear lordy! i like i like i like! please keep this going!

Short but still good. "'You people?' " Kiannon exploded, "what the hell's that supposed to mean? The male gender as a whole, or mages, or what, exactly?"

HURRAH! An update at last!
It doesn't matter that it was only short, what we got was great!
I totally love thhis story! Ive been checking almost everyday to see for an update and finally, just as I was about to give up hope, you updated!
Bless you, mellonamin!
Luvs Elfie x

Very good, i thought i had reviewed this . . . guess not. My favorite character is one-nine, interesting name by the way. And now i know why he's called on nine.

I'll read more later

Belle

This is truly excellent. I was hooked from the start. Your style of writing is very entertaining, and you've got three (four perhaps) very distinct characters already without much OTT description. In fact, I really wouldn't worry about not writing that desctiptively at all. Some people have a poetic style, which works for them, but your story is commendable all by itself, and I think that trying to add more description would just detract from the story's effect.

One thing - as I reader I started thinking that I'd like to know more about One Nine. I'm still wondering exactly how humanoid he looks when not a wolf, and he has the potential to be a very funny character once he develops some more :)

Anyways, I think I'll stop rambling now. Keep it up, you're on my fav list, and I'd love to see that pic sometime...

wow this is a very good story i can't wait to read more. please up update very soon and please r&r my work it's called the crystals of the elementals.
from Aimie