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anich 2006-11-06 . chapter 1
very beautiful may i say

good day
anich
Guardrail 2006-09-10 . chapter 1
This is well written and you have a great focus; you make good points and I can relate. Your rhyming is very natural. Great work, I liked this a lot.
Lady Padawan 2006-03-31 . chapter 1
I like how you suggest that "identity" is *fluid* in the last stanza. Boy or girl, man or woman, love knows no sex, age, or design. Gorgeous!

Princess S.
LynaX 2005-10-15 . chapter 1
Quite excellent and I love it! ;-D
Skylar Rose 2005-07-18 . chapter 1
I'm glad to see you found what makes you happy! What a strong piece! And you rhyme so naturally!! Great, great work!

~Skylar Rose
Clap Clap Raise Your Hands 2005-03-04 . chapter 1
Interesting, good poem, some lines didn't read all that well... I liked the lines, but the structure changed a lot, and sometimes it felt like there were words missing to make the lines a bit shorter which distracted me from the content... but from a second reading I do like this... have written some poems on a similar subjet, come and have a look see if when you have some time. keep writing x weasel within x
Nanners 2005-01-14 . chapter 1
Nice poem. I like that it rhymes! ^_^ I love rhyming poetry.
Boys For Sale 2004-11-19 . chapter 1
Nice poem! From your biography, it seems you are the same sort of guy that I feel like sometimes... I like how you are involved in your school.. I am the President of my GSA- it's so much fun. The world needs more people like you.
sciwriter13 2004-07-08 . chapter 1
i love this poem. you are an excellent writer.
an ebony flame 2004-06-26 . chapter 1
Very impressive. Usually, I hate rhyming poems, but the rhyme in this one accurately enforces the theme.
xLecta 2004-05-02 . chapter 1
Wow. That was. GREAT
bravo bravo
Beautiful wording, idea, format, powerful ending, it was wonderful.
Daughter Of Liberty 2003-12-13 . chapter 1
I like it. It's very detailed and realistic. it even rhymes! it's awesome.
libras 2003-09-11 . chapter 1
The beginnig had kind odf a typical feel to it, but otherwise, it was a great poem (and I usually dont say this cuz I dont know much about poems).
MonkeyAlien 2003-08-28 . chapter 1
Very nice.
greenfroggies 2003-06-18 . chapter 1
moving...beautiful. An amazing poem - so much emotion in it! Keep writing and i am glad you have found yourself.
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