|Reviews for Eternity in a Kiss|
| anich 11/6/06 . chapter 1
very beautiful may i say
| bipedalcooney 9/10/06 . chapter 1
This is well written and you have a great focus; you make good points and I can relate. Your rhyming is very natural. Great work, I liked this a lot.
| Lady Padawan 3/31/06 . chapter 1
I like how you suggest that "identity" is *fluid* in the last stanza. Boy or girl, man or woman, love knows no sex, age, or design. Gorgeous!
| LynaX 10/15/05 . chapter 1
Quite excellent and I love it! ;-D
| Skylar Rose 7/18/05 . chapter 1
I'm glad to see you found what makes you happy! What a strong piece! And you rhyme so naturally! Great, great work!
| Clap Clap Raise Your Hands 3/4/05 . chapter 1
Interesting, good poem, some lines didn't read all that well... I liked the lines, but the structure changed a lot, and sometimes it felt like there were words missing to make the lines a bit shorter which distracted me from the content... but from a second reading I do like this... have written some poems on a similar subjet, come and have a look see if when you have some time. keep writing x weasel within x
| Nanners 1/14/05 . chapter 1
Nice poem. I like that it rhymes! _ I love rhyming poetry.
| Boys For Sale 11/19/04 . chapter 1
Nice poem! From your biography, it seems you are the same sort of guy that I feel like sometimes... I like how you are involved in your school.. I am the President of my GSA- it's so much fun. The world needs more people like you.
| sciwriter13 7/8/04 . chapter 1
i love this poem. you are an excellent writer.
| an ebony flame 6/26/04 . chapter 1
Very impressive. Usually, I hate rhyming poems, but the rhyme in this one accurately enforces the theme.
| xLecta 5/2/04 . chapter 1
Wow. That was. GREAT
Beautiful wording, idea, format, powerful ending, it was wonderful.
| Daughter Of Liberty 12/13/03 . chapter 1
I like it. It's very detailed and realistic. it even rhymes! it's awesome.
| libras 9/11/03 . chapter 1
The beginnig had kind odf a typical feel to it, but otherwise, it was a great poem (and I usually dont say this cuz I dont know much about poems).
| MonkeyAlien 8/28/03 . chapter 1
| greenfroggies 6/18/03 . chapter 1
moving...beautiful. An amazing poem - so much emotion in it! Keep writing and i am glad you have found yourself.