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isagallagher
2008-01-06
ch 1,
abuseI love your disclaimer! Hahaha.

And the story's very sad, but lovely. Oh, the angst! I hope you post the entire thing when you write it.
Scarby
2003-07-14
ch 1,
abuseAw... When you write the entire story, will you post it? I would love to read the whole thing. Like, how can an elf change to look like a demon? But it's wonderful!
NotEnough
2003-06-02
ch 1,
abuseI hate discrimination in any form. And just because he looks evil...pah! that's horrible, the poor thing!

I should mention you write beautifully. Generally i don't read Elf fiction, but i am glad i read this. It has a rather sad ending, but is perfect.
Val Mora
2003-05-07
ch 1,
abuseAww. . . so sad. Maybe Kian could have gone WITH Aryn? I wish he had, because then I might be happy - but I think it's best as it is. I really adore this. ^_^ It's lovely-gorgeous.
SethFox
2003-04-23
ch 1,
abuseOh some male/male elf action! :D
plus that and even tho being the sadistic anarchist I am, I seem to enjoy love stories!
O.o yha i know, its scary huh
Cayenne
2003-04-23
ch 1,
abuseHey, great story. Um...is there more of this? You said that you were working on a bigger story so is there any way to get a peek at it? It look like it has alot of potential ;) Ja ne!
Lami
2003-03-21
ch 1,
abuseoh god please tell me there is more of this!!
i can't read absolute pwer right now even though i'm dying to but *whispers* i'm in a lesson, so it'll have to wait, but from what i've just seen of your writing it's defenetly something i look forward to.
this fic was absolytly perfect, gotta go.
*gets told off by teacher*
-Travis
Fragmental Dani
2003-03-14
ch 1,
abuseAnd there's nothing more of this wonderful angsty story WHY? *grins* Good job.
Erotic Antibiotic
2003-03-08
ch 1,
abusethat was awesome, I loved it, keep writing and update soon!

SuperDork
Pigwidgin
2003-02-25
ch 1,
abuseA really sweet read, I thank you for writing it. *smiles* I especially liked this part :".and noticed that tied around his wrist was a thin plait of ebony black hair."
Take Care
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