looking back on my life it scares me how much of this Ive actually done.

I was looking for this.. Wanted to read it again.. Haha-- previous time I couldnt review coz of some prob with the com.. Anyway haha-- Yeah-- So true.. I liked it man.. Coz I always cant sleep too.. Its cool.. The poem is actaully pretty cute.. Good job.. haha..

i competely agree wiv the title! this is a very funny peom *gets up from fits of laughter* last verse is pretty true too. personaly i hate thinking to much!

neways great poem well done.

I've tried to learn German three times and I've failed. I can see your point.

I really liked that. It's original and I can detect a subtle sarcasm in it.

ha! this is so true! you hit it right on the nose, tho i've never tried to learn german. its very wll written too. good job. ^_^

I think too much a lot. Sometimes I can't sleep because of it. However, I try not to get weighed down with trival issues.


~Heart of the Sword

Maybe i should try all that! Thank for the inspriration!
Luvs elfie x

Hey that's really cool. And that is so advice that I need to take. I've cried so much in this last week from thinking too much about things. Your poem really made me smile.

This is pretty damn cool my friend. I like this poem a lot, its kinda wird, but also really true. I just thought I'd do my bit and return the review, and I'm glad I have cos ur good!

Thank you for the advice,

I guess I'm one step close, German I already know.

Great poem, actually I thought it would be a limirick(sp?), but you've surprised me,

another excellent work!

T.L. Demeter

very very very good. i liked it alot. good job and thanx for the review

thanks for the advice...I'll try and remember it at three o clock in the morning some time...a good poem...it rhymes o.0

nice. good cure for insomnia. that's what i always do.

i'm liking your poetry. it all actually says something useful. what i like about it is the proper use of thought process. so many people attempt to write a poem of anguish or last minute anger. but they make the poem to well thought out. or a poem of final thoughts before death, and write a poem that's too disconnected. your poems are supposed to seem well thought out, and they do. it makes me happy

Bravo ^_^ I'm pretty sure i get what you mean. Whenever I don't keep myself busy, its always easy to start thinking about sad things.

Tee-hee-hee

It's funny because it's true.

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