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| pieces 2004-05-29 ch 1,  | abuseWicked rowdy. I know it doesn't seem that way, but ... there's a lot here. I like it very much - good job. ~Gabby |
| Shadow 3013 2004-01-06 ch 1, | abuse:dies: Oh, wow, that one hurts. Just, all the emotions here, it's... Well. Quite amazing, really. I'm completely taken by this story. :hugs it: Lovely job, indeed. |
| zagato 2003-11-22 ch 1, | abuseGreat story! |
| Anoyo 2003-08-23 ch 1, | abuseThe lack of names for the character(s) is quite a nice effect. It lets you associate the thoughts and emotions with anyone, not just whomever you wished it to be about. It's an open-ended, open-mouthed, open-minded story. The main character could be male, could be female, could be anyone. Another great story from you. Ann |
| LoveSasa 2003-06-27 ch 1, | abuseWow. That was.. Good. ~Mizery Rose~ |
| Jennifer L. Rawles 2003-04-12 ch 1, | abusesad |
| Lisa 2003-03-26 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis was good. Anyone who has been in that position can relate to this story. You can feel all of the emotions going on in this person's head. |
| VegetazGrl 2003-03-10 ch 1, | abuseI agree with Tiane, there needs to be more a death maybe even something though, but it was awesome I'll give you that, if you give us another chapter =) |
| Tiane 2003-03-01 ch 1, anon. | abuseAs usual, amazing angst here. Sharp and poignant. I'm begging you-- please, add more chapters, or add sequels. It's too painful to leave him like this. Please? |