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Reviews For: Swimming In Riches

Rhyssa Dragonlady
2003-02-28
ch 2,
abuseThis is intriguing.a tad overdone on the intrigue/mystery, but that can be remedied in later chapters.watch comma errors, and write more soon
thunderwitch
2003-02-25
ch 1,
abuseGood so far. No grammatical or spelling errors.

And short doesn't necessarily mean bad, which this wasn't.

Next chapter soon?
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