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| Rhyssa Dragonlady 2003-02-28 ch 2, | abuseThis is intriguing.a tad overdone on the intrigue/mystery, but that can be remedied in later chapters.watch comma errors, and write more soon |
| thunderwitch 2003-02-25 ch 1, | abuseGood so far. No grammatical or spelling errors. And short doesn't necessarily mean bad, which this wasn't. Next chapter soon? |