What a gorgeous poem! I know I've read it before, but I thought I'd reviewed it then... Ah well. It was still beautiful. Lovely job, keep writing.

Gah! I haven't reviewed this one yet? *slaps self* And this is one of my favorites too. I confess to being slow and still (after a few weeks) not being able to figure out the real meaning, but I still love it! *ponders some more*

you're amazing! keep it up...

Spooky...I like this. I've never exactly been in love with a ghost, but it must feel really bad if they're not there, I'd imagine...

Woah, man. That was awesome. Deep, too...jesus. Way to get me thinking!

Amber: ...You...think?

*thwap* Silence! Silly, stupid characters...::cough:: Anyway! I really, really liked this. There was something about the language in it that made me...I dunno. I can't really describe it. Nice work! Excellent metaphor. _

Keep writing, and thank you for the nice reviews!

Namir Swiftpaw

Aww... ::sniffle-cry:: This rocks! I'm going to see this on a coffee mug in a poetry store someday. I love it, I love it, I love it!

(( Mark or Randy or neither? o_o ))

-MB

Aw...so sad...but i like it anyway! _

A charming piece of work. In what way is it related to your life? please let me know. Could you maybe email me when you post new stuff, I just dont wanna lose track of our work!

sal

Wild poem!

So cool. I love the idea.

Great job

whe!Now they put copyrights at the bottom of stuff!That's so cool.!Interestin' poem.I can see where you were inspired by the beginning and middle of the poem were okay, but what really made it come alive for me was the end.I love the end of this poem! Though it didn't seem like the usual Marleyish poems you usually , have fun, but don't forget to review my stuff.

-Amberose

:*pouts*You took my chainsaw without asking!And you don't own me!Amberose is the only one allowed to own me. You only have a plushie that LOOKS like me. Besides, I look a lot better than that knockoff!

Amberose:*sticks out tongue*See, told ya so!

Sometimes I interprete things to a too-fine dissection, and sometimes I just brush past any sort of translation. I'm not quite sure what I did with this poem yet - but I loved it. Love it still, really. You have a way of using language so that it's simple and yet lovely, and I love it.

WOW! I liked this poem a lot! I have yet to figure out its underlying meaning, but I'm gonna do that after I get my review out of the way. Nice poem. _