i wish i could write something like that! your a good writer keep it up!
this was beautiful! :)

.wow
and you say you can't write poetry. >_<
That was better then any of the shite I ever managed to write. It was so ubber-ultra-shibby!
Keep it up!

Toodles
^_~

At the risk of sounding like I have a short attention span: Oh, pretty! ^^

~WZB~

Loved it! sad.but beautiful as well.