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| the naked civil servant 2005-08-07 ch 1,   | i really like the end, it's a twist on this idea. also "live their lives of stone" - cutting :D |
| Supertheory 2004-04-13 ch 1, | May I worship your writings instead? Heh...yeah, religion's a bit vexing (who am I kidding, A BIT?). I have a couple Christian extremist friends...they ** me off at times. A lot of times. All the time. But I must admit, the Bible is a fun book to read...sex, pain, war...and uh, other "holy" teachings. |
| M. Edward Thoza 2004-01-22 ch 1, | i would review your profile if it they would let me... little girls don't use the word misanthropic neither do they write with such anger and insight i love it |
| Cherry White 2004-01-19 ch 1, | great ending@@! |
| adarial ciao 2003-12-27 ch 1, | i like this and agree with what you are saying. the last lines are awesome and really stuck in my mind. |
| firess 2003-06-30 ch 1, | short but very good. do u not like any religion, or just the ones that try to force you to join? |
| Sarryn 2003-03-05 ch 1, | I always enjoy a good religious bonfire. Brava. |
| lady-of-the-wind 2003-02-25 ch 1, | I'm back.beautiful. I love poetry that has meaning.:) |
| Linden Tree by the Sea 2003-02-25 ch 1, | You're going to Hell. LOL just kidding. *holds up her Bible* Repent, yee, for thy shall.awe nevermind I'm not good at it anyways, heh. I really loved this poem! It's just dripping with animosity, it's great! And to think, me a good Christian girl.heh, I only read for Revelations. More of this, please! It's like the words actually create a persona of their own! |