Just a question...Are you ever going to update this story? It says the last time you updated was Dec. 15/ 03... it'd be great if you did, it's a wonderful story adn i'm really into it.NC

I love this story so far. The pictures you create make it very easy to follow the story and you have an excellent depiction of the Majdi and their discrimination. It makes you really wonder about this Feug guy. Anyway, wonderful story.NC

Hey,Wow, great chapter. I'm really impressed with the description you've put in your story, it give me a very clear picture of the entire world, though it wasn't until near the end that it became clear that all the groups of people were on the same planet (Humans, Majdi, and Beashan). If feel as strongly as you do on the description thing, because you can't connect with the story if you can't connect with the characters. Keep it up, I'll read the next chapters when I have time.NC

P.S. Thank you for reviewing my story, it led me to this one. I hope you keep reading mine, as I will keep reading yours (because yours is awesome...lol). Chapter 2 and 3 are a bit more lighthearted but once chapter 5 hits, then the real story hits.

PLEASE can we have more soon?! It isn't fair (yes, this is a whine) to leave us hanging- - - !!
Great novel by the way.

You're going to hate me, because I'm one of those reviewers that hasn't read the story. I wanted to ask you something, though, and I couldn't find your e-mail address. I found you through another story, which you reviewed saying something like, "please don't much bad stuff (like sex) in here."
Er...why do you consider sex 'bad stuff'? It's perfectly natural. You wouldn't be alive without it, honey.

ok. some update soon? yes? *hopeful grin*i couldnt bear it it you just left it at that

Tantalizing. :) When's the next chapter coming?
I do think however, that you could proof-read a bit more. :/
Any particular reason for the choice of the name "Kejam?"

Its a nice Idea, and Im sorry i dont have time to read the whole thing right now. I will as soon as I can though! You're a good writer and dont let any flamer tell you differently

Wonderful. Beautifully written. This piece of work is superb, I dont know why I haven't read it sooner. I love your character's... they're so... Well I dont know if firm is the right word, but what I mean is their personalities dont change in two chapters which most authors (Including myself...eh) tend to do.
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I really do love this story and I hope you update soon because I am dying to find out whats going to happen. Toodles!
~Twi

Liked it so far. :)
Oh, and watch out for your apostrophes.
Chap 1 (its, not it's; shoes, not shoe's)
and melodramatic, you mean ;)

Very good beginning of a story. I cant wait to read the next chapters.

Wow! Wonderful update! Love Allie! Love Feug! I look forward as always to the next chapter...and I hope I don't have to wait another three months. Even if I do, it'll be the best thing that will happen in my life!
Keep up the very great work!
Bravo! Encore! More!

I've updated. Finally

Excellent chapter, Ekatay! Keep it up! I look forward to the next installment.

Excellent chapter, Ekatay! Keep it up! I look forward to the next installment.