Hm... the second story I read for the night. Somehow, it reminded me of a story I read in The Year's Best Fantasy and Horror Stories... I dunno... either a similar style, or a similar theme.

Of a girl, running free...

Wow. That was beautifully written. I am practiclly speechless! Athough I do not condone incest in real life, this story had me sympathizing with this poor girl. Kudos!

wow. i really liked that. very well written. good story plot too. i didnt expect her father to find them.