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| Salt and Vinegar Pringles 2005-07-23 ch 1, anon. | abuseI read your bio and you'd written this before you were eleven? That's impressive. Because even now some of the author's who are at least sixteen or seventeen have trouble writing as well as you did, and including this kinda of grammar. I'd say well done to that kid writer. |
| cloverluck11 2005-02-26 ch 15, | abuseamazing! you're story is really good. i absolutely love the plot! i cant wait till everything is set in motion!! i also cant believe u dont have more reviews, i mean u're story definetly deserves more. please, please, update soon! |
| pillowfighter 2004-08-30 ch 13, | abusewoah... excellent. that's all i have to say. the first thing that draws me to a story is the title and then the summary. so i read the twilight child and i wasn't disappointed at all. u have a very original plotline and i am enjoying it alot so far. Do CONTINUE! |
| NeWriter 2004-06-11 ch 13, | abuseHello! I must say that I've just finished reading your story and I think it's awesome! I absolutely love the idea that you had for this plot and the way you seemed to handle the characters' and their feelings. I like the mystery that you give towards Tom and I'm quite intrigued to know what happened! This is very descriptive and you seem to make Matt and Sakura very strong persons. I laughed inwardly at some parts as I read them. Well, I don't have anything constructive to say to you except that I hope you've been having as much fun as I with this story! [The descriptions are very good too as well as the plot twists. What's a good story without them?! :P] Maria. (NeWriter) |
| scenicmoods 2003-09-16 ch 13, | abusecool story i really liked it so far but i kinda dont understand the concept of the shadow/shape figure behind sakura but i still really liked your story please update soon! |
| TaLeeYa 2003-08-30 ch 13, anon. | abusewell.., when r u planin 2 up date? wat did sakura see anyway? Good luck with ur family problem. |
| Sublimegrl03 2003-07-24 ch 13, | abuseI like this story alot! Sakura is everything i wish i could be! Brave and stands up to every guy that comes across her path! And a real ** kicker i should say! |
| Ishuzu 2003-07-19 ch 1, | abuseGreetings! I have to say, I just read the first chapter to be able to review and thank you for reviewing Kiss from the Angel of Death, but I really like the idea of this story so I think I'll put it on my favorites list *click* There. It sounds very interesting... Anyway, what I came for was to thank you for reviewing my screwed-up angel story. And though you sounded like you could have probably written the ending better then I, I was flattered by your review. Thanks! And I'm glad you like Tom. But would that be the muse, as in the Tom I'm always bickering with, or the character, as in the guy who's in love with Amaya? Either way, there's really not much of a difference... I'm glad you liked the story and feel free to email me if you wish. -Ishuzu |
| BaeWulf 2003-07-17 ch 13, | abuseAnother great chapter. And I thank you for writing it. |
| Aftertaste of Cyanide 2003-07-15 ch 13, | abusei would DREAM of killing you (for the soul reason that if you are dead that means no more updates at all) but your right it is SO late! I had almosr given up hope on it. please say the next one will be quicker? loki sama |
| Richard Head 2003-07-12 ch 12, anon. | abuseYou must be writing one H-E double hockey sticks of a story to take twice as long as you did last time for you update. Not trying to sound like a jerk and disrespect you but C'mon! I've been waiting for your next chapter for two months. Listen, you must try to keep working on your stories, poems, etc. whenever you have the time to spare. Take this review for example if you want to call it that. This shows how much I enjoy your story and wanting to read more of it. I hoped I proved my point to you. (And I will send this exact message to your e-mail address.) |
| matt15086 2003-07-08 ch 12, | abuseGreat story! I was wondering if you can review my story called Earth is under attack. THe chapters are not in order but it does have a prologue.THanks! Bye |
| Byrdde 2003-06-15 ch 12, | abuseGee, it's been a while since I reviewed. Many, many apologies. Wow, it usually takes a while for me to start hating characters but Dicko is just a jerk! And, aww, Matt's starting to like Sakura. I love the mixture of humor and battle-to-the-death, it really lends your story a unique feel. Hope for more updates soon! ^_^ Valé! |
| Myra Tchaikovsky 2003-06-09 ch 12, | abuseO! You HAVE to continue. This is soo cool! Thank gosh their is a lot more romance in here than the other chapters! ~*~ Violet Angel ~*~ |
| I-Wuv-Muffins 2003-05-31 ch 12, | abuse^_^ hehe like this chapter! Bleh... Dicko... *gags* even the name sounds weird... |