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Kyalia 2003-06-05 . chapter 1
It's good, but is it a WIP? (I hope yes). Shameless plug: You mentioned 'cracked' Latin teachers a while ago. See "Haven" for more on that.
Sasha 2003-03-13 . chapter 1
Need I say it? Ok, I guess I do "WRITE MORE!" Ok, This is what could happen:

They roam the Solar system and eventually return to Earth, discovering the bare remnants of civilisation. They must survive in this post apocoliptic world of lawlessness. I wrote a story something like that once
James Jago 2003-02-27 . chapter 1
An outstanding start; please write more ASAP.
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