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| Entei-rah 2003-10-05 ch 1, | abuseWow! A nice short poem, and I haven't even read it yet! I must be slipping in my old age. Anyway, this certainly says a lot in a few words. Well done. Just remind me *not* to try saying this too quickly. =:o Now, after all this reading, I need a rest. =;) |
| Namir Swiftpaw 2003-08-21 ch 1, | abuseHeh! Wonderful play on words...I usually don't like puns...but this was cute! =) Keep writing! ~Namir Swiftpaw |
| All Midnight Eyes 2003-07-04 ch 1, | abuse...One would think that the shortest things would be the easiest to review. In that case, every time I read a long poem I should write a page or two complaining about it. Or raving about its excellent points, whatever the case may be. But it never happens like that. Anyhow, now that I've rambled on for a bit, I think I should actually review your poem, don't you think? ^_^ Okay, well I must say that when I first read your poem I was tempted to raise an eyebrow, say something *very* intelligent like "bah, pft!" and move on. But then I re-read it. And I truly like it. The punning is delightful. You have, at least in this poem, that rare and lovely talent of being able to express a great deal in just a few words. As this review exhibits, I am hopeless in that area:) Anyway, very, very nice. Keep up the good work. *she said, sounding very cliche* ^_- *Clarie* |
| Stormer 2003-05-15 ch 1, | abuse*LOL* that was so cute. You really managed to pull it off. Hehe. Love the cute punning! But anyway, I am going to email you 'cause I have more to say about non-fiction related things *G* And also will review more of your stuff either now or in future I'm a bit pressed for time currently as it's kinda my bedtime. *lol* |
| VladimirsAngel 2003-04-25 ch 1, | abuseHumorous Hare Haiku. With a political message. Some folks are just way too clever. Loganberry, and you're one of them ;) |
| aleppine 2003-04-14 ch 1, | abuseI don't know hy the word 'cute' comes to mind ... i like the way this contains humour and wordplay while being about something quite sad. Very ... rounded |
| Impressionist 2003-04-09 ch 1, | abuseyes...I'll just say perfect and be done with it. |
| RainShadow2005 2003-04-07 ch 1, | abuseLol, well this was a cute little thing. It was short, to the point, and light. I used to have some like this (in structure) but I removed them because they were being ignored. |
| Random 2003-03-12 ch 1, anon. | abuseHehehe. Dont you just love wordplay? |
| spaztic-moose 2003-03-12 ch 1, | abuseYou say I'm odd? Wait, I am. OK then. What a lovely poem. moose |
| Ronin Rabbit 2003-03-10 ch 1, | abuseCute poem. Makes me think of someone on the sideline just getting lost in their own little word game. |
| Aryaveiel Skycryer 2003-03-04 ch 1, | abuseHi! I made a deal in my bio that if someone reviews one of my stories/poems, I will review one of theirs. I chose to review this one because none of the others make sense. Come to think of it, this makes very little sense either. You British.:) Very humorous, still. So, thanks for reviewing! I do appreciate it. Just out of curiousity, how did you come across that poem? After a month I usually figure no more people will review it. |
| lkjsdfgkljsadflkjgsdfjg 2003-02-28 ch 1, | abuseLast, my **. But I share your wish. This is good. Twelve words, ooh, amazing. But the conciseness does something for it. I like this. |