Wow! A nice short poem, and I haven't even read it yet! I must be slipping in my old age.

Anyway, this certainly says a lot in a few words. Well done. Just remind me *not* to try saying this too quickly. =:o

Now, after all this reading, I need a rest. =;)

Heh! Wonderful play on words...I usually don't like puns...but this was cute! =)

Keep writing!

~Namir Swiftpaw

...One would think that the shortest things would be the easiest to review. In that case, every time I read a long poem I should write a page or two complaining about it. Or raving about its excellent points, whatever the case may be. But it never happens like that. Anyhow, now that I've rambled on for a bit, I think I should actually review your poem, don't you think? ^_^
Okay, well I must say that when I first read your poem I was tempted to raise an eyebrow, say something *very* intelligent like "bah, pft!" and move on. But then I re-read it. And I truly like it. The punning is delightful. You have, at least in this poem, that rare and lovely talent of being able to express a great deal in just a few words. As this review exhibits, I am hopeless in that area:) Anyway, very, very nice. Keep up the good work. *she said, sounding very cliche* ^_-
*Clarie*

*LOL* that was so cute. You really managed to pull it off. Hehe. Love the cute punning! But anyway, I am going to email you 'cause I have more to say about non-fiction related things *G* And also will review more of your stuff either now or in future I'm a bit pressed for time currently as it's kinda my bedtime. *lol*

Humorous Hare Haiku.

With a political message.

Some folks are just way too clever. Loganberry, and you're one of them ;)

I don't know hy the word 'cute' comes to mind ... i like the way this contains humour and wordplay while being about something quite sad. Very ... rounded

yes...I'll just say perfect and be done with it.

Lol, well this was a cute little thing. It was short, to the point, and light. I used to have some like this (in structure) but I removed them because they were being ignored.

Hehehe. Dont you just love wordplay?

You say I'm odd? Wait, I am. OK then. What a lovely poem.
moose

Cute poem.

Makes me think of someone on the sideline just getting lost in their own little word game.

Hi! I made a deal in my bio that if someone reviews one of my stories/poems, I will review one of theirs. I chose to review this one because none of the others make sense. Come to think of it, this makes very little sense either. You British.:)

Very humorous, still.

So, thanks for reviewing! I do appreciate it. Just out of curiousity, how did you come across that poem? After a month I usually figure no more people will review it.

Last, my **. But I share your wish.
This is good. Twelve words, ooh, amazing. But the conciseness does something for it.
I like this.