Hey! I actually went on FP.net!

This was actually very good, take this as a well-earned compliment coming from me b/c I feel queasy whenever I even see blood, let alone hear stories of it.severed back? Ack!
Nonetheless, your poetry's cool!

-Ayla

~What about second breakfast?~

Hm, I think it would be better if you didn't try to rhyme it. It's good, don't get me wrong. Just the rhyming feels so forced. The ryhming should go naturally with the poem. But in otherwards it's rather well done ^_^

Nice, a little graphic ^.^" but nice. Really great title, it caught my attantion.
Thumbs!
Arrivederci!
-Terra Tigra-

Wow that waent bad but were was he humor?!
Tell me! tell me!. MADNES! MADNESS!
*coguh* well not bad. hehe =P


Blood Scuk

hmm.kinda gruesome. but it aint bad..