I'm right there with Bridget (Karbon Okapi). Good work! On to more!

Hmm. 'and at the beginning of time mcnamara billy was the appositive. billy was the caesura.' is so thoughtful. I really like the whole thing, but that part in particular.

i think i am in love with billy

grammar mcnamara and his sandstone

earth (or is it your attribution to him?)

and it's all thanks to your poem,

the fields and lexicography

and billy's blue tie and patrician

profile. Grammar is made beautiful again.

EG