I liked that. Very different and very original. And I do enjoy the darker aspects of life, so I naturally loved this.

Hm... I think the rhyming kind of hampered your lyrics in this case. The rhyme sounds a bit forced, although I may be mistaken. Also, the meter seems to change throughout the song, making it somewhat difficult to read. You use a great deal of imagery with regards to darkness throughout the piece, as well as fire (blackened, fire, Hell, burning) in the chorus. I found that to be an interesting contrast. The only other constructive criticism for this piece is that you repeat the same chorus 4 times. I'd personally like to see you shake it up some. ^_^
Also, on a side note, the best way to get rid of your anonymous flamers might be to ignore them altogether. They probably just want the attention.

Hmm, this song reminds me of my friend.I've known her for about 5 years now, and I've always accepted her as she is, even though she tries to make me change to fit in her [and supposedly everyone else's] little world. I finally realized that I don't have to like who she is, and I don't. I finally see what she is, not what I thought she was. She is not a good person. Thanks.

Nice one.I really like the chorus to it, I like it a lot!

Its good, maybe not as good as the other two but still well written. The fire, desire lines stick a bit in the chorus but everything else is great. ryn: no, that was not intentional. I *am* the Queen of Mistakes. Theres one in every song. I really thought I'd got over that annoyance this time :P