Oh, how could you stop now? It's wonderful! Continue ASAP!

oh wow-please continue, this is wonderfully , i'm sorry to say you've got a few larry stues and mary sues that get a bit annoying at times. oh but do continue!

this story is so good so far. keep up the good work. i love how you do the two point of view.

Excellent, I'm a huge fan of Revolutionary War stories and this one is among some of the best I'v ever read

Hey I really like your story and i think you should continue with it, your writing is very good and it would be nice if you would update soon!