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| siddika 2007-01-04 ch 2,  | abuseGOOD STORY. |
| anonymous 2004-08-01 ch 20, anon. | abuseAH! YOU CRAZY WOMAN! SHE NEVER KNEW SHAWN WAS ON THE OTHER SIDE...WAIT...YEAH...SHE NEVER KNEW...AH! CRAZY WOMAN! WHY DID YOU HAVE TO DO THAT! WAH! okay...i'm gunna go read the sequel now...heh..too high...must lay off sugar...>_ |
| Slightly Bent Halo 2004-07-04 ch 20, | abuseok, so despite all my horrible negativity.. it wasn't that bad. and the ending was ok.. just gonna read the authors note thingy, but i hope u weren't too offended by my comments.. it wasn't terrible, i did manage to read it all.. i just thought it could do with some more realism... |
| Slightly Bent Halo 2004-07-04 ch 19, | abuseok, so this chapter was actually ok.. more believable. i thought the fact that he drew her with puffy eyes was hilarious! |
| Slightly Bent Halo 2004-07-04 ch 18, | abuseok, i'm gonna say it agin.. UNREALISTIC! i mean c'mon.. it's their two month... way too overboard in my opinion... |
| Slightly Bent Halo 2004-07-04 ch 17, | abusestill finding it unrealistic.. i know i'm not really being that helpful.. but i am still reading so that counts for something right.. and i am improving ur review count... don't hate me! :( |
| Slightly Bent Halo 2004-07-04 ch 16, | abuseok so i feel bad coz i think i'm coming across as lil miss negative, but a candlelit dinner on the beach? blah... |
| Slightly Bent Halo 2004-07-04 ch 15, | abusehm so i think the whole age thign is a problem coz i think they're acting about maybe 14, but they're supposed to be about 16.. actually maybe older coz in one chapter they could drive.. so i dunno.. i just think that's inconsistent |
| Slightly Bent Halo 2004-07-04 ch 14, | abusehm, i don't really get alot of the stuff with this.. i guess i can't really relate.. |
| Slightly Bent Halo 2004-07-04 ch 13, | abusei don't GET IT!! why did she leave? |
| Slightly Bent Halo 2004-07-04 ch 11, | abusehm, the whole denial thing is ANNOYING ME! but i guess now they have kinda admitted it... oh, and i feel like i'm being really negative.. it's not that bad.. i am still reading it... |
| Slightly Bent Halo 2004-07-04 ch 10, | abusewhy is he denying that he likes her.. i don't get it... i guess i can't really relate to this story much.. but i'm determined to read it all.. |
| Slightly Bent Halo 2004-07-04 ch 8, | abusehe likes her so he's hanging up on her? hmm, and i'm guessing she's in the book... |
| Slightly Bent Halo 2004-07-04 ch 7, | abuseok, so i knwo it's fiction and doesn';t have to be realistic.. but i think the whole bitchy friendship thing is a bit immature if they're supposed to be about 16... |
| Slightly Bent Halo 2004-07-04 ch 5, | abusehmm, i'm just finding it all a little unrealistic.. like people don't normally open up that much, and be that honest so quickly.. well at least ii wouldn't! but that could be just me... |