THIS REALLY OPENS UP MY MINED TO HOW I USE TO BE, IT CAN REALLY MAKE ONE THINK OF THERE DISTANT DARK PAST AS THOUGH IT WERE YESTERDAY...SOMETHING I HAD FORGOTTEN...SOMETHING I WANTED I...

GREAT POEM

This poem is mesmerizing. I like the imagery that you set, but some parts seem a little cheesy, I must admit. This seems a little forced. Do you know what I mean? Don't take that offensively, cause overall, I like this poem a lot! :) Mind reading some of my stuff? Anyway, nice job!