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Reviews For: Grey Lake

Masked Coconut 2003-12-20 ch 1,	abuseI must say, I really enjoy your writing style. It's enjoyable to read, and the history doesn't bog the story down at all. This is better written than the work of a lot of published authors, I think. Great job so far!
Leah Claire 2003-08-08 ch 1,	abuseI love this story! It's just the kind of fantasy I like-that is, character driven. My only suggestion would be to separate the paragraph that you introduce Kathera in from the beginning part about the war. As it is, it's run together. But maybe FP.com did that and not you :) I hope you continue with this story!
The Lady Assassin 2003-08-01 ch 1,	abuseWow! This is fantastic! I can't wait to see what happens! Your writing flows so that one hardly realizes how much they've read until they're done! Excellent! I really like the beginning. It's a nice touch, giving a bit of history, I'm curious as to where the conflict between the two is going to lead. I am curious about something though. How much time had passed between the Baron's return and the birth of Kathera? I'm assuming quite a bit, but I wasn't sure. Again, beautiful story! I love the way you write. The Lady Assassin
J CAE 2003-07-31 ch 1,	abuseReally good. Keep up the good work! Update soon!
Malissa Michelle White 2003-07-18 ch 1,	abusewow. This is absolutely amazing. I completely admire your style-- I dream of writing so, so, so formally, as if it were completely coming from a 3rd persona account of events that really did happen. Jeez, I am utterly amazed. Plus, the story is so well developed and well thought out. wow. Please write more, for the sake of humanity, write more! And if you would be so kind, review "The Star Warrior" for me. I'm looking for feed back from a writer such as yourself.
KEEO 2003-07-17 ch 1,	abuselearn something useful... I know! it's science isn't it? it couldn't be anything else, this is clearly a story about science. "kathera the maths student" should be the name of this story. :D read this here, it's not mine, but it's really interesting, and it's in LOTR style of course: http://w.fictionpress.com/read.php?storyid=1306488 forgive the author (Njerzatov) for any grammar errors. it's because he is dutch, just like me.
kult black 2003-07-14 ch 1,	abuseJust found this while bored out this universe, this is weely good, plz keep it going! Loff n Stoff kult x
dark-shade-soul 2003-06-04 ch 1,	abuseHello! I've enjoyed this story a lot, you have a very good narrative style and the plot so far is very gripping. You also have a interesting set of characters. Can't wait to read more. ^^ T~
The baava Project 2003-05-30 ch 1,	abuse^_^ This is a wonderful beginning! If I may, the only thing that sort of bothered me is the pace your tale moves at. It is well thought-out with wonderful descriptives, yet it seems to skip over personal details of any character until the end. I know that's what you were going for, but perhaps this would do better split up into a prologue and then the beginning of a chapter. Again, this was good, and I really enjoyed reading it! ^_^ I do hope you continue sometime . . . ja ne, LoK

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