Well, it's about time but. . .uh. . .I guess I shouldn't be complaining since I'm having trouble updating my own but it's good to see your in the same boat I am. I really like this chapter. You brought in a big surprise. Yay!! Oh and sorry I haven't gotten a chance to read this before now. I just consider myself lucky that I didn't have to go into work today. Until next time. (Update soon, please!)

Hm well. I like the plot and the derection in which it is headed, you have a good sense of what the reader wants to hear and know. However, one thing I would correct is this: (Sorry if I sound too much like Ms. Blake)

Grammar and consistency, in the beginning of the second paragraph you say "There was a lot of things." Say instead "There were a lot of things." and try not to adress the reader directly with phrases such as "you see,"

This is not to detract from your writing which is really quite excellent! In fact, I was quite entertained by what I read and I ask earnestly that you write more!

Nunc scio videoque! Alis volas propriis atque experentia tui docet!

Hmm. . .I wonder what's going to happen at the ball. I guess I'll just have to stay tuned to see, right? It sounds very interesting but fool-proof plans are never fool-proof so I can't wait to see the next chapter. Get it up soon!

BTW: Thanks for the awesome review!