Nice! this is definately Adrain's thought and love the part where it goes. 'For if I sleep; the heavens will weep' nice nice^^ like it loads^^

WOW, i like this... i'm kind of a dark person sometimes though, but i really do like it... the scariest part, is that it is so much like today's world and is not even the future. if this is how dark our present world is, how much worse can it get? some times i don't want to know.

Wow, this is kind of short, but really good.

Poetry, eh? Not terrible, your rhyming is kind of annoying, though.

This was very good, and dug a bit deeper into Adrian's dreams...Aidan's life...and all that nify gory stuff! Keep em comin' Xan, and I'll keep readin'!

I really liked this. It went great with Dark Illustrations too. You're really good,I can't wait for you to complete your stories.

wow. well written

WAH~! Scary! Awesome! ... Scary-Awesome! lol. anyway I really liked this poem! (can you tell) Where have ya been lately? Somethin' up? Come back soon!

Hey, that's not bad! How the hell did I manage to miss it?! *_*

That's a good poem. I like both the length and the ending, which I . . . ususally don't like. :P And I honestly have nothing else to say, LOL.

|Meduza|

I love Dark Illustrations and I love this poem just as much. It's beautiful.

...you shouldnt think like that...its my job..but even so chicka you kick **...

Oh this is wonderful! ^_^ poor Adrian ... ^_^ if he's a-scared to sleep I know something he can do that takes all night ... meh heh heh heh heh (again I display my scary fangirl lecherous laugh) but he'd need a partner ... ::cough,cough:: ::dies laughing:: oh god, bad mind bad! ::scolds self::