This tale is so tragic yet beautiful. Your imagery gives her such mysterious beauty. The legend is one to remember.

hey! awesome, i like how u start telling a myth and end up telling the irony of it coming to be true. very nice.
pili

This line "Who isolated herself," reminded me of myself. But that's just random. LOL.
I truly like this story. It's a tale all sumed up into a poem. I like it. I like it a lot.
Regina O.B.

1-The story here is so clear and so good

2-I love your imagery and the way you always seem to express exactly what you want to say

3-Um...there is no 3

:D

winged one

The descriptions of the ice madian are beyond anything! The relations you used were fantastic and so fitting, this would make to a fabulous story ne?

Chilling and yet tragic Really good...rnrnrnrn

o! thats so lovely! and sad, but i like sad love poems, i dunno why. really good though!

The story teller you are and this is very well written!

Please keep writing them.