How do you do it? That was amazing. Such vivid imagery, such beautiful poetry. You have a gift. :)

Avoiding fashion magazines to she lives inside are my fave lines.

beautiful, deep, inticing and perfect.

i am buried within your poetry

excellent, as usual!

Kinda depressing, but not really. Lovely imagery though, nice way phrases as well

Jess

nor-nor. you know how i feel about this one. it's lovely, but it makes me very sad to hear you speak that way about your own wonderful self. anyways, enough personal rambling i guess. bittersweet, though bitter seems to outweigh the sweet. tragic and vivid. shows true character conflict.