i wouldn't be surprised if you won an award!

it's a really sweet and sad poem.
I like it because it gives a lot of meaning. ^^

Love it.

I thought the startin was really good.. Interestin choice of vocab.. Rhyming is good.. However, somewhere in the middle, the poem seemed slighlty forced, perhaps because of the rhyming.. The endin however, is good as it leaves an impact on the reader.. Good message behind the poem.. I wonder if you could post the shorter one up for a look see..

Can you arite a single thing without at least 6 cliche' phrases? Jesus!

A good poem with a good message. I wonder what your shorter version was like?

:-)