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| MistressELEMENT 2007-01-14 ch 1,   | wow that was really good i loved it A.R.-MistressELEMENT |
| failte200 2006-11-22 ch 1, | THAT'S more like it! :) What is it with you and "second person"... Damn. I want a boyfriend now. I imagine my wife would object, though. |
| neurotic ca 2006-09-29 ch 1, | I really like the structure of this and minimalist style to this. Your word choices are beautiful and the ending is very satisfying. Great job. :) |
| Modern Actide 2006-06-12 ch 1, | N-aw. That was cute. |
| Wings of Fenrir 2006-05-21 ch 1, | awz and you have a differnt writing stlye than most |
| rodeoclown 2005-08-30 ch 1, | Beautiful and intense. You do a really good job of getting across Jaisyn's feelings of nervousness and anticipation. This story seemed very real to me. |
| Sabe 2005-02-27 ch 1, | M... Very nice. ^^; |
| LadyLynx 2004-12-05 ch 1, | I love stories written like this. In that point of view, they're awesome, as is this. |
| FamousOneLiners 2003-09-06 ch 1, | sweet, completely sweet and hopeless |
| Anoyo 2003-08-23 ch 1, | The second person has a nice sort of melodrama to it. The characters are specified, but, once again, you can really associate it with anyone. The names felt like a sort of add-in. That had a nice vibe to it. The personification of sex was a little new, too. Keep up the great work. Ann (And I do that too; using the same character names more than once. . .my friends get a bit annoyed w/ that. . .) |
| Cheyenne 2003-06-28 ch 1, | I'm automatically in love with this. You're going on my faves. |
| LoveSasa 2003-06-27 ch 1, | Really, really good. I read this where you posted it in a community on livejournal, but the silly thing wouldn't allow me to comment. Anyways, I most certainly enjoyed it. ~Mizery Rose~ |
| Jennifer L. Rawles 2003-04-12 ch 1, | awsome and is underground part 2 of this? |
| Morcalivan 2003-03-29 ch 1, | *purrs* OMG, I loved this! It's so sweet and unassuming. You have great writing style. Truly beautiful. |
| Leaf 2003-03-18 ch 1, | Love this story so much, you should write this from Abes point of view aswell, love to know whats going on in his head, its all so nice how it ends. |