this story was great keep up the good work

I think that this was such a great fanfic! I especially loved the ending. Please, please do a sequel:)

Kristen

Hi! Thanks for the review. There *is* more to "Falling", but I can't remember how it went; I somehow lost the other half. *sighs* Oh, well. Thanks again! Peace!

LORD SEREBI! hello he's a king he is bound to be busy with work such as politics, world trading, and treaties, so don't get any ideas that he was doing anything else! got that! this is kitty we are talking about, if u wanna go dirty read the other one! actually don't.

W0W, it ended. I like: Gabrielle sits up. "Your father has had a rough night, let him sleep."

Hmm, makes u wonder huh :-D

simply marvelous! few errorrs! simply wonderful!

That was awesome! All the fighting and CLANK CLASH sound effects was great! added to the feel of the story (mood? scenery?) yeah keep it up... oh right the fightings over :(

I NEED MORE!

*submit review*

HI! YEA IM BORED SO I READ MY STORY AGAIN...AND AGAIN! THIS IS REALLY COOL. I CANT BELIEVE I CAN WRITE THIS WELL. HEHE! SEE YA FANS LATER! KITTYSHINA

isabel is back Good! when did isabel find out gabrielle was getting married?i dont remember you saying she did. i looked over your story(skimmed it so i may have missed something) and i didnt see it, email me the part where she found out ok or tell me what chapt!WHY ISNT ANYONE READING THIS!

ok 3 good then 3 bad(like in class)

good:

1)the first couple lines are well written *wink wink*

2)"OTMA" very creative almost all of them

3)unexpecting situations

umm negative

1)making the letter an seperate paragraph is easier to read, especially for those who are blind!

2)dialogue would be easier to read if in own paragraph(no biggie)

3)ur pen name is kittyshina14 not kittyshina*sticks tongue out*

ur sis narihitomi

This is even better than the story before this one!

i have so many ideas for this story. it's definetly not ending at chapter 10. got lot's of stuff planned so kept checking for new stuff. R&R thanx a bunches. Kitty

that was great,also I am looking for someone to write me a poem or story based on the relationship of sam and diane from the television show Cheers, and you write very well. I would love it if you would write me one. let me know if you are interested , my email is

hey buddy ole pal! its hjl and i luv ur story ! quite interesting if i do say so myself. Mereally like it and i have no critisism!:-D

it sounds like anya is gonna get pissed and banish scarlet or something and then scarlet and chris will run away, hey thats a cool idea. use it if u want