 JillieRose 2003-03-01 . chapter 1I have to say I liked ur story - though I feel obliged to point out I like everything that doesn't involve rape, murder or pointless swearing. Anyway, I'm digging myself into a grave here, so in an effort to pull myself out, may I advise some more description of the speaker and her friends.
Keep writing!
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