my favorite parts are the cosmic sphinx, the harps of hydrogen and diguised saccharin. this is so spiffy! i've said this many times. but you're great at this! and thanks for reviewing. you don't know what you're missing w/out zelda..

Pardon my ignorance but what exactly does quies mean? Is it latin? Anyway, I read the poem twice and I think I get it now. I'm probably way off though. Your words are lovely as always.

Oh, JD...
You never cease to amaze me. Your writing is so wonderfully complex, and yet so emotionally bare and raw all at once. Scaldingly beautiful. But then, I shouldn't be surprised. That's what you get when dealing with reincarnated faerie princesses. *shakes fist* damn you, in all your fantastical glory!
As usual, that was my very round-about way of saying 'I love it'. You probably got that by now.
Love and big jolly grins to you,
-S

it's kind of formulaic, and the imagery is rather vague. you used 'they' too much, and, hey, sentence fragments aren't everything. and enough about the damn stars, ok?!