Reviews for A Marriage Of Convenience

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etherealangel 2008-07-31 ch 1, anon.	abusei have been following this story for the past 4 years and am sad/happy that it has finally come to a resolution. I remember halfway through- with the updates spaced so far apart- that I was really worried that you were not going to finish it! your writing had definitely spoiled me- my tolerance for badly written fanfiction and original fiction went down after reading this. And the ending- totally did not see it coming. It was a VERY clever way to frame the story. With some editing, I think you can definitely find a publisher for it! I also believe it would make a great movie too! Thank you so much for writing such a great story!
Elle Winters 9 2008-07-11 ch 38,	abusewell there u go.. im glad u ended it happily, because im a sucker for happy endings and when i read the last chapter i was thinking.. "i cant believe this", and was going to skim over the epilogue until i saw parker mentioned and thought.. "hm" but anyway, it was/is a great story, you do have some grammatical errors, but there is just one main error that i want to mention and that is the mention of the hotel room where clark is woken up in the shoddy motel. i think you should cut it out, or change it to carly's pov because otherwise it doesnt work, because carly never does know his reaction. i hope you get what im talkin about, and i don't rmemeber what chapter.. just the one wich starts with him being to tired to care about being woken up at 4 am and tripping over n grabbing himself on the doorknob.
Elle Winters 9 2008-07-11 ch 26,	abuseun... =Z aren't shampoo bottles plastic? or do the wealthy do glass ones in this story?
Elle Winters 9 2008-07-10 ch 3,	abusenonono what's the pi- word?!
Fallen-Agent 2008-07-05 ch 38,	abuseAMOC was great. I loved everything. It made me laugh and cry, and think. Great
KarmaC 2008-07-01 ch 38,	abuseOkay, so this is one amazing thing you've cooked up here! I almost hit the back button after I read your first chapter, but became totally enthralled as I forced myself to read the second! This story has all the makings of a good one, at least in my mind. Sarcasm, cynicism, money and scandal. It also has a love story and some little twists and turns that make it great. I love that you told the story as if Carly/Liv was actually telling us the story. Wonderful job and I hope to read more from you!
Rumsha 2008-06-23 ch 38,	abuseamazing.
midnitefaeri 2008-06-17 ch 38,	abuseThat was AMAZING! I was so sad when i finished the last chapter. Clark and Carly belong together. Or should I say Liv and Parker. So i have to say that I LOVED the Epilogue.
Angel-Leigh Jones 2008-06-13 ch 38,	abusehiya great story, so intense, and mind blowing. I loved every minute of the story. I hope you are still writing. I would suggest you get this published, its very very good. angel
storys 2008-06-11 ch 38,	abuseFirstly, I would just want to say sorry for being such a crap reader. So ages ago, I found this story and read it and loved it deeply and reviewed once on chaper 31. And then something happened, lost my account, lost the sory. Then earlier, I found it and started reading it again. Even though I haven't read it in like, a year or so I still remember it SO clearly! This story really made me remember it and I think you're an awesome writer. I love the ending because I'm a sucker for happy endings. Thank you so much for this and I think you should publish it so I can read it all the time, over and over again wherever I want, instead of only having it when there's internet and a laptop. This was a great story as the characters were realistic, the plot well though out, although honestly the whole rich thing went a little over the top but I don't know because I'm not like them. And I was always raised to believe no matter what your parents would love you, as long as your siblings (I'm an only child, have got no clue bout siblings) so I found it harsh how horrible their parents were. BUT OVERALL, I LOVED THIS STORY AND IT'S ONE OF THE BEST STORIES I'VE READ!
Giggles4evr 2008-06-10 ch 38,	abuseThis story is amazing! It felt rushed a bit at times and sometimes it was hard to follow the time line, but other than that I absolutely adore this story. Thanks for writing it.
rainbabie 2008-05-27 ch 38,	abuseThis was a very entertaining story! Thanks for a great read :)
musha 2008-05-16 ch 11,	abuseGood grief this chapter had me laughing so hard I felt I would burst at the seams...excellent excellent. I can't wait to finish reading it. I just love your voice in your writing and the flow of the sentences. Fantastic job as far as I have read. :)
Inkhearts and Inkstains 2008-05-13 ch 38,	abuseWow, even though you finished this sometime ago, this is the first time I have come across it and I am in awe...I love the dual ending, it is properly finished. You have an incredible insight to human nature and clever character manipulation. I would love to say humans aren't like, but sadly I know only to well but I'm pretty sure you don't want to hear angsty rich girl whine. Anyway I love your story and I can't wait to read more of your work.
lovingstar 2008-05-02 ch 1,	abuseI have to say that your story is just absolutely amazing! It really teaches you that money is not important at all!!

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