WOW. That was great... i love it... This is soo cute.. I can so see them arguing... This story is just adorable..It gets better and better... I dunno bout the spell check though... I wouldn't mind beta-reading it for you if u need it! Email the stuffz to me if you decide to... Thankz!

My word, I wondered if you'd disappeared! It's good to see you updating again! _

I would be more than happy to be your spell checker - be it American English or English in it's original form.

Oh, and by the way...

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- My highest honour

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That mean's your story is on my favourites list!

Good story!

Hehe, I like it. Lifestyles of the Rich and Famous gone terribly wrong.

What's a 'temporary beta'? Okay, so I'm out of the loop. Bite me. If it means you email me your stories and I spellcheck them and send them back, I'd be glad to help. :)

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Please could you write more!

I like your story so far. Please update soon.

don't kill it! it sounds intresting!

oohh! I like it! more..this is so cute!

Wow! I like the way this one is turning out. I'm glad you continued.

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Oh my gosh...

As with all your writing, I thoroughly enjoyed this!

that's awesome! you're really good. even when you start reading it, you can really picture the character telling it and even how they might sound. you did a great job in the whole voice. it seems to be a very promising story, also. i love these types of stories. i'm looking forward to the next chapter. keep up the greatness!